Losing control
September 9, 2009 § 15 Comments

I pull myself closer. Or so I try. Under the intent pigment of a parched moon, the candle’s flame whirls fiercely in the air, burning rapidly. Up high above, a slice of cheese melts under its heat. I can feel the burn, putting my insides to flame. An elating singe, giving me goose-bumps. It’s a strange exaltation that rips through the restraints of containment – a rare freedom, a feeling devoid of a control whatsoever, floating like placid exaltation and drifting across the dark crease of the night. I can feel its cold touch against my skin ablaze, the cool fragment of air patched atop the flaring desire. The heavy breathes scent with the late-night odor of damp wind – I can barely take it anymore. All my facets start to cringe under the pull of this agitation. Barely intact anymore, I let go. The balances finally tip and up in the zenith, a chunk of the cheese moon goes missing.
I close my eyes. It is the complete moment.
YUmm cheese xD
Pizza.
Wow…
The image perfectly goes with the content of the text…
*amazed*
(:
Thanks :)
Wow o.o
“All my facets start to cringe under the pull of this agitation.” – this line is great!
It is good to let go sometimes.
Take the plunge….
You’ll surface a better person or not..
Salman: You’re most welcome (:
And I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again & again & again… But don’t you ever get extra sure of it x.x :P :P …
You’re an excellent writer ^^
@Anas
Thanks (:
@Mayhem
There’s just no way to. I’d have loved to – in fact, that’s what it is. But well…we all got to hold us back :D
@M.M
Lol. Thanks (: You’re going to land me in lots of khush fehmi :P
Well, in that case, you’re not that excellent :D
From ‘that’ I mean the level a writer may wish you achieve (;
*From ‘that’ I mean the level a writer may wish TO achieve (;
True. There’s a long way to go :)
And inshaAllah you’ll make it (:
IA :)
Very nicely written, visiting blog after many days.
I don’t see comment option for poem above !
Thanks :)
And there is an option for the comments on poem too :S